The thing that caught my eye in the thumbnail was the pose. It's dynamic, has a great perspective and looks just the way you'd imagine yourself after going in headlong very good!
The colours are also nicely done, and fits the setting perfectly, being watery and all. It looks comic-like, which is a good thing considering it's a fanart of a manga!
Room for improvement would be the hair, as I'd imagine that being a little more out from the head, floating about, and maybe the face expression These are minor things though!
All in all a good deviation! I will give an overall 4 stars, with originality being 4.5 because of the pose and underwaterness
dang i forgot to press add comment.... ok i really like how you drew her, its just like perfet, besides the back leg critique: i see what you are trying to do but it kinda bothers me maybe it being back a little. Did you paint or photoshop this? i think i see 2 layers of bubbles, the ones infront of her and one behind her but they are the same size maybe varying slightly, i would like to see maybe bigger bubbles tward the front
I drew and colored this all on Paint tool SAI, yeah. And i definitely see what you mean about the bubbles, for sure, but i'm not sure what you mean about it being "back a little"? It might just be me being dumb, idk xDD
The back leg really irritates me as well. i think it might be the foot? idk. But i do know it is pretty wonky.
Anyway, definitely thank you for the critique, and I'll try and work on this some more.
being back a little, hmm maybe you will understand visual planes it seems there are bubbles in 2 dif planes but there are infinant planes on the actual picture you did, i guess maybe like 4 layers of bubbles would have done it for me, cant wait to see what it looks like if you decide to fix it ahaaa
I will try to provide a fair critique:
The thing that caught my eye in the thumbnail was the pose. It's dynamic, has a great perspective and looks just the way you'd imagine yourself after going in headlong
very good!
The colours are also nicely done, and fits the setting perfectly, being watery and all.
It looks comic-like, which is a good thing considering it's a fanart of a manga!
Room for improvement would be the hair, as I'd imagine that being a little more out from the head, floating about, and maybe the face expression
These are minor things though!
All in all a good deviation!
I will give an overall 4 stars, with originality being 4.5 because of the pose and underwaterness
Cheers~
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